In my opinion the above example isn't bad because of the formal aspects (according to the rules one should write $\forall_{x\in X} \varphi(x)$) but it is just ugly from the linguistic point of view (as perfectly pointed out by Graphth). Simply (as written in the answers to the linked non-meta question) in plain text one should avoid quantifiers.
$\def\N{\mathbb N} \def\R{\mathbb R}$
However. It is often the formula ($\varphi(x)$) that is important and the quantifier $\forall_{x\in X}$ is obvious from the context. Then we usually write like in the example "function $f_n$ is increasing for all $n$" rather than "for all $n$ function $f_n$ is increasing". And if we have a complex formula written with symbols in a separate line ($$
), then in my opinion it may be a good notation to add $\forall n\in \N$ at the end of the line rather than struggling with adding text-style "for all natural $n$" to the symbol-style formula (it's firstly mixing styles and secondly unhandy in TeX).
Similarly, if we have a long pointed list of formulas with different quantifiers (written at the end), it may also be more clear (easier to compare or look back to when reading further paragraphs) if written with symbols "$\forall_{n\in \N}\ \forall_{r\in \R}\ r>n$" rather than words "for all natural $n$ and real $r$ bigger than $n$". When I just want to check some trivial conditions ("was it $<$ or $\leq$?") reading symbols is faster than reading words.