How to improve posted questions math vocabulary?

I am not very strong with math vocabulary and I am currently struggling with posing good questions. I have two questions posted here

How to improve the isometric immersion of a $n$ dimension conformal metric of one variable conformal factor to be less than $2n-1$ dimensions?

and here

https://math.stackexchange.com/questions/857292/is-there-a-class-of-second-order-homogeneous-differential-equation-with-a-finite#

and I need some help implementing the correct vocabulary.

One issue I discovered was phrasing "one variable conformal factor", relating to $\omega(x_n)(dx_1^2+dx_2^2+\cdots+dx_n^2)$. I am not even sure if that represents a specific class of problems in Riemann geometer.

• There are two ways I can read your question: (1) I didn't get much feedback - maybe it's my formulations?, or (2) how to improve math vocabulary. As to (1), your writing is just fine - if you got no answers, then this is probably simply because no one knew an answer (or an expert in the field didn't notice your question). As to (2), 2 ideas are to click a tag of interest and read answers by very high rep users (you'll notice soon some have phenomenal English), or to start reading text books in English. After a while, this becomes 2nd nature (I'm no native speaker myself). – gnometorule Jul 8 '14 at 14:31